Author Topic: Oh wonder - The rain (blank edit) WIP  (Read 5955 times)

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Oh wonder - The rain (blank edit) WIP
« on: January 06, 2016, 02:50:35 am »
https://soundcloud.com/musicisblank/rainy-days/s-9Q9tj
just a wip but im stuck on it haha pretty chill though
« Last Edit: January 06, 2016, 03:00:51 am by blank »

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Re: Oh wonder - The rain (blank edit) WIP
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2016, 03:14:31 am »
Interesting initial idea, but it could use more variation to keep it interesting as the track progresses imo

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Re: Oh wonder - The rain (blank edit) WIP
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2016, 03:18:23 am »
yea I love the foundation, flesh it out with some melodic plucks or perc to give it some variation :D

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Re: Oh wonder - The rain (blank edit) WIP
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2016, 03:20:14 am »
Kick feels nice and dirty, good slow groove :)
It definitely feels like a repeated initial idea; needs variation like Mat said. :) I'm really feeling a jazzy piano riff with a tennyson sort of vibe (look them up) but really it could go wherever your heart desires, it only needs to go somewhere for some more interest.

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Re: Oh wonder - The rain (blank edit) WIP
« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2016, 03:27:08 am »
thank you guys, I primarily just looped it all to see what the finished track would look like and then I add/ takeaway from there :) thank you all for the feedback!