Hi! https://soundcloud.com/jasher-1/deeper-love-jasher-remix/s-GWc36 This remix is due TOMMOROW and I really really need feedback/little tips to make it sound as best as possible! Its for a Contest!!! Please gimme feedback ASAP on how to make it better!

Thank You!

Fixed! Sorry about that!

Personally I would go for a little more high end in the mix, that could just be soundcloud though.

Music is so subjective, I really can't tell you much besides what I would do, which is based completely on my taste.

This track has a lot of cool moments, and some moments that feel like filler. I think the track could be half as long, and possibly twice as effective. Dance music doesn't lend itself well to 6 minute songs without a lot of variation. I would try and pick out the most emotionally charged sections and piece them together much shorter. My stance on effective songwriting: Its better for the listener to want more, than to have too much. Thats kinda why 26 song albums don't do amazing (generally).

Also, I would add more rhythmic and harmonic variations during the drop. That just where my ear goes, what I feel like should be there when I listen. This is a good example of what I mean: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mu7SSzQRoz8 Skrillex is great at variations and fills during his drops.

Good luck!

Holy Cow... Thank you all for the amazing support and advice! It really means a lot to me that people are actually willing to give me feedback on this random track as opposed to just ignoring another random thread in WIP section <3

I agree with alot of previous posters, it could use some shortening!

The bass became kind of repetitive now since it's rather long. Now I can't really tell you how to fix it, since i don't know how to, but the drop felt somewhat underwhelming.

I think that if you take only the parts of the song you really 100% like, remove the rest, reduce it to about 3-4 min, you'll have a banger!

what really sticks out to me is how your main lead sound gets kinda lost in the mix when it drops, i believe its due to too much reverb on the effects/vocals and phasing from the effects with your main lead noise, I would try to do some more eq adjustments and definitely try to do some panning on your drums the sit dead center in the mix.

 I find that it helps alot when you nudge certain things to the left and right a little bit. Also try eqing away conflicting frequencies where your clap sits cause it feels like it gets lost at times. especially on my studio monitors.

the white noise/shakers could also do a lot better with some more groove/possibly different samples. they come across pretty clear but kind of sound weak. Something that might help would be to apply some saturation/distortion to them. if the vocals already have too much reverb you can always try to apply a gate effect with a low threshold to try and tame it.

Your idea is great but i think you might to need to spend more than today on it to get it up to standard quality, but please by all means prove me wrong.

good luck!

Track's really good, but I gotta say, hats are just plain bad. Take a reference track and get some hats based around that(Any CID song should work), otherwise I really like it!

Good luck on the contest!