Hey

Look at the high end there's TOO MUCH of it , as well try not layering sounds too much as it get really messy sometimes , as well when the drop comes it feel over compressed and not as loud as the break was , try putting down the volume by a couple of db's in the break and working on the drop mix !

Blake Light Tnx man ^^

well i really try to put some melody things in this song, the main melody (When start at 1:48) i add 2 hours ago, its good, but i dont know... erase all the idea of the main song, n the 2 drop i add some variations... well i hear sometime this tune to decide what i make of this new melody XD

hey man sounding pretty good idea wise, I'm gonna list out a few things as i hear them!
the kick has an uneven click to it that is off balance with the left ear that i think should be punching in the middle. breakdown is sweet, love the chill pluck. some of your FX are a little loud imo but thats a little bit more of a preference thing. 2:30 is a nice build but theres some pedaling kick or some low end element going on there that doesnt meld well imo, feels a little muddied. Drop could use some revised mixing, love the overall idea to it but the bass feels oriented on the right hand side and as a rule of thumb you'll want your bass and other core elements (kick clap snare sub) should be relatively monophonic for mixing purposes and for club purposes. Good luck!

Hearts tnx for you feedback man!!

I'm going to re-evaluate the music along with the feedback, having a visual reading skills than you said really had changed a few things on it hahaha again thanks ^^