maybe try reworking the melody it doesn't flow too well, drop kind of needs a transition/buildup comes in unexpected, drums are on point, groove flows well.
Thanks man, I appreciate that. I usually add risers/impacts and all that fancy stuff near the end of the track, but if I can think of ways to write it in before then I'll do that for sure. The melody is a little awkward too, I'll rework it for a bit.
Near the end, try to decide on a key signature. The kick drum in the end part is not in the same key, so it sounds out of place. Are you going for a trap main part?
Like I said earlier, that section is not serious. I just threw it in as placeholder to maybe give other people an idea on where to go after the intro section. I'll keep that in mind in the future though, thanks!
I played with the vocals and kept the rhodes concept, but took it in a bit of a different direction. I think the hip hop vibe probably works better with the bass sound you had so don't feel like you need to go with this, but here's my spin on it. Maybe it'll give you some new ideas!
https://clyp.it/d2vjnhr5
I really like that. Like a lot. I'm definitely going to work in something like that, I think the mood of that will contrast well with the intro if I can get them to flow well. Thanks a bunch man, this is good stuff!
