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Feedback for progressive WIP
« on: January 07, 2016, 08:13:29 pm »
https://soundcloud.com/vutorandom/wip-1/s-e0D5g

Hey, this is a new WIP from me. I hope you can give me a feedback! Don't pay much attention to the transitions, will change it when I have feedback to change the track at the important parts!
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Re: Feedback for progressive WIP
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 08:18:26 pm »
Hey the link isn't working for me, is it broken or is my computer being funny?
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Re: Feedback for progressive WIP
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 08:20:28 pm »
Quote from: Voyali on January 07, 2016, 08:18:26 pm
Hey the link isn't working for me, is it broken or is my computer being funny?

Having some technical issues, will upload it again! Wait a bit
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Re: Feedback for progressive WIP
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2016, 08:25:08 pm »
Link updated!
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Re: Feedback for progressive WIP
« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2016, 08:33:52 pm »
Ok these are just slight nitpicks that'll go along as I listen

At 0:15, maybe add some sort of "impact" after that quick white noise riser, then maybe more reverb with the section afterwards, or at least make the entire section just seem "larger" and "louder" up until 0:45. Then for this bit up until the drop, make it grow even more possibly, because the drop is VERY loud compared to the rest of the song.

I love the drop melody, at 1:30, this section needs something new, maybe hi-hat shuffle? Then some rising affect to lead into the next breakdown.

The same things I said with before can be applied to the second half of the song haha. Drop is very loud (as it should be) but maybe a bit too much compared to the other sections? Idk, these are only nitpicks haha, but I love the melody you've got going on.
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Re: Feedback for progressive WIP
« Reply #5 on: January 07, 2016, 08:43:29 pm »
Quote from: Voyali on January 07, 2016, 08:33:52 pm
Ok these are just slight nitpicks that'll go along as I listen

At 0:15, maybe add some sort of "impact" after that quick white noise riser, then maybe more reverb with the section afterwards, or at least make the entire section just seem "larger" and "louder" up until 0:45. Then for this bit up until the drop, make it grow even more possibly, because the drop is VERY loud compared to the rest of the song.

I love the drop melody, at 1:30, this section needs something new, maybe hi-hat shuffle? Then some rising affect to lead into the next breakdown.

The same things I said with before can be applied to the second half of the song haha. Drop is very loud (as it should be) but maybe a bit too much compared to the other sections? Idk, these are only nitpicks haha, but I love the melody you've got going on.


Thanks! I already said that you don't have to pay much attention to the transition, will change that later, obviously. I'll make it less loud and will try to make the break much larger as you said! Thank you :)
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