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Disarm you remix WIP (Updated)
« on: January 07, 2016, 07:59:32 pm »
https://clyp.it/bf2flmle

Feedback Please!
I started this at the beginning of my winter break and I want to get as much done before school starts (next week).
Still new to this whole making Trap thing, if it's even trap...

Update:
https://clyp.it/za4wmptg
So I've gotten it pretty far, but I'm not too sure what to do for the part of my track after 1:30... I spent so much time on 0-1:30 that I'm like clueless on what to do right now...
Also, I'm happy to take any advice for the first part of the song.
« Last Edit: January 14, 2016, 12:16:41 am by Joseph »
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 08:04:05 pm »
Hey,

Nice work on the leads. I like them. the kick is too weak. try layering a punchier kick to it. To make it slap the entire shit.
I also feel like the claps aren't enough. you'll need a big ass snare.

Sounds good so far, keep it up ;)
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 09:09:17 pm »
Okay! I'll try that, thanks!
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2016, 09:25:40 pm »
The kick is pretty soft (needs more power ) nice idea though , The brass sound that comes in on the latter stage of the drop could use some widening and possibly another layer to it .
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP (Updated)
« Reply #4 on: January 14, 2016, 12:16:12 am »
bump - updated
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP (Updated)
« Reply #5 on: January 14, 2016, 09:07:01 am »
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP (Updated)
« Reply #6 on: January 14, 2016, 12:00:07 pm »
It could do with even more oomf on the kick.  So for what I always seem to comment on: It´s very wide.  Put on a  glue compressor, and if you use a stereoizer then try turning it off or down.  Hope this helps.  Cool track.
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP (Updated)
« Reply #7 on: January 14, 2016, 03:54:33 pm »
Heya, I'm back here.

So kick is now much better. I like how the "horns" lead sounds. Snare/clap are a bit lost during the drop. try using a different one sidechaining could be enough. Everything else is very cool.

Sounds a bit repetitive but that's it.
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP (Updated)
« Reply #8 on: January 14, 2016, 06:31:40 pm »
Quote from: ion on January 14, 2016, 12:00:07 pm
It could do with even more oomf on the kick.  So for what I always seem to comment on: It´s very wide.  Put on a  glue compressor, and if you use a stereoizer then try turning it off or down.  Hope this helps.  Cool track.

Is there an FL equivalent of a glue compressor? Seems like it's only for Ableton

Quote from: Babasmas on January 14, 2016, 03:54:33 pm
Heya, I'm back here.

So kick is now much better. I like how the "horns" lead sounds. Snare/clap are a bit lost during the drop. try using a different one sidechaining could be enough. Everything else is very cool.

Sounds a bit repetitive but that's it.

yeah.. I'm working on that :(, haven't really done this in a while  haha
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Re: Disarm you remix WIP (Updated)
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