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My remix of Outside .. Need Good Feedback plz
« on: January 07, 2016, 07:23:07 pm »
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Calvin Harris - Outside ft. Ellie Goulding (UltraJack Remix)
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Re: My remix of Outside .. Need Good Feedback plz
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 09:31:40 pm »
The track starts off with a lot of elements which can seem overpowering, I think slowly introducing all the elements (pluck, vocal chops, etc) over time would give the build up to the breakdown more impact and ease the listener into the song better.

For the drop, I don't really hear the kick at all.  Do you have any sidechain going on with your lead synth?
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Re: My remix of Outside .. Need Good Feedback plz
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 10:27:06 pm »
I would focus on making sure mid/high frequencies are in Stereo, And bass is in mono. Also needs some more mid frequencies in the drop, maybe try making a couple supersaws. Make sure those super saws have some good stereo width though.

I do like the vocal chopping/rise thing you did in the 2nd drop/outro. Maybe tease that in the first drop a little. Good luck!
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Re: My remix of Outside .. Need Good Feedback plz
« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2016, 08:03:29 am »
Quote from: Shew on January 07, 2016, 09:31:40 pm
The track starts off with a lot of elements which can seem overpowering, I think slowly introducing all the elements (pluck, vocal chops, etc) over time would give the build up to the breakdown more impact and ease the listener into the song better.

For the drop, I don't really hear the kick at all.  Do you have any sidechain going on with your lead synth?

Thankz buddy !!!
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Re: My remix of Outside .. Need Good Feedback plz
« Reply #4 on: January 08, 2016, 11:45:56 am »
Quote from: Shew on January 07, 2016, 09:31:40 pm
The track starts off with a lot of elements which can seem overpowering, I think slowly introducing all the elements (pluck, vocal chops, etc) over time would give the build up to the breakdown more impact and ease the listener into the song better.

For the drop, I don't really hear the kick at all.  Do you have any sidechain going on with your lead synth?
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Re: My remix of Outside .. Need Good Feedback plz
« Reply #5 on: January 08, 2016, 11:46:42 am »
Quote from: Shew on January 07, 2016, 09:31:40 pm
The track starts off with a lot of elements which can seem overpowering, I think slowly introducing all the elements (pluck, vocal chops, etc) over time would give the build up to the breakdown more impact and ease the listener into the song better.

For the drop, I don't really hear the kick at all.  Do you have any sidechain going on with your lead synth?
KICK IS NOT MIXED PROPERLY I GUESS... WILL LOOK INTO IT
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