https://soundcloud.com/ocularedm/ocular-id/s-7MfNi

Some notes:
I'm really only looking on feedback from the beginning to about 1:42. After that, there's a bridge that I only just began making and the second drop is just copied and pasted to maintain a song structure.

My main concern is the lead in the first half of the first drop.

If you have any composition ideas or mixdown feedback it would be quite appreciated!

- right from the intro theres some foley crackle in the left ear that is bothering me because it has no right ear presence
-the melody is a tad bit hard to follow in the beginning from a fresh ears perspective but when it gets to the drop it sounds nice,
-I think your drop synth works but could potentially use a little more distortion/layering to bring it out a bit more.
-pluck section is dope
overall sounds like a solid start, gl

i like this a lot.  its different and more chill than a lot of future bass.  the drums sound really nice but the kick is a bit loud.