A link could be better...

So, let's start this.

First intro, nice progression. I like the voice in the background. Fit to the genre, i guess.
Breaks are actually surprinsigly good. I like the violin, and the piano is very good.

Drop, The kick is good, but it seems like your 808 is a sample. If so, try creating a real sub bass. It will make it more powerfull. The synth/lead is very cool, in both drops. (First and Second)

The main ideas are pretty well executed, most of the track sounds good.

PS : there's a clicky thing at the start of the track. Needs to be removed, if it's not wanted.

Quote from: Babasmas on January 07, 2016, 07:24:12 pm

So, let's start this.

First intro, nice progression. I like the voice in the background. Fit to the genre, i guess.
Breaks are actually surprinsigly good. I like the violin, and the piano is very good.

Drop, The kick is good, but it seems like your 808 is a sample. If so, try creating a real sub bass. It will make it more powerfull. The synth/lead is very cool, in both drops. (First and Second)

The main ideas are pretty well executed, most of the track sounds good.

PS : there's a clicky thing at the start of the track. Needs to be removed, if it's not wanted.

right on. i'll try the sub idea thanks

try using an LFO or an envelloppe to make it pitch down. (like a real 808)

Quote from: Babasmas on January 07, 2016, 07:38:39 pm

try using an LFO or an envelloppe to make it pitch down. (like a real 808)

how would you normally do that? i feel it loses some power once it goes too low.

I'm not saying that you actually pitch it down, but if you look at a 808 sample you can still that it fades out. the LFO or the enveloppe will allow you to do that.

What DAW are u using ?

ah so i just automate the volume? ableton.

It's not really the volume. but could work.

I rly dig the track,but I cannot feel 808 at all...
Try layering two same samples of 808 and put some distortion on them,so u can hear it well on small speakers too...
Put the 808 in mono and cut unwanted highs and u have it
I hope this helps

I rly dig the track,but I cannot feel 808 at all...
Try layering two same samples of 808 and put some distortion on them,so u can hear it well on small speakers too...
Put the 808 in mono and cut unwanted highs and u have it
I hope this helps

right on! thank you - i'll layer the 808's so i can hear them on laptop speakers.