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arigato

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Kind of future wip 2
« on: January 07, 2016, 05:19:31 pm »
So we currently work on this track and aren't sure whether we should finish it or not and we thought posting it here would be a nice option to get some serious feedback.   

New version: https://soundcloud.com/arigatoo/glassydasylasy/s-lDWVI

Feel free to leave any comment we are open for any critics. And if you have any suggestions for the title we would be pleased  :) (^_<)
« Last Edit: January 09, 2016, 12:35:23 am by arigato »
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Florae

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Re: Kind of future
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 05:23:10 pm »
Loving the vibe of this and how damn full it is! Can't really critique the mixing because I'm listening to it on my crap headphones, but it sounds really good so far. Can't wait to hear the rest! :D
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Re: Kind of future
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 05:27:06 pm »
Really enjoy the composition.  The drop seems a little ambiguous and certain elements like the first set of wobble chords seem slightly out of place.  I think the mixdown could use work.  in the intro it would be sweet to bring in a cleaner, mid-low square-ish pluck to contrast all the airy saws.  Overall it seems to focus on brightness which is good, but the kick is a lil weak and it could use some more sub and just bass.  Nice feel to it, excited to hear the outcome.
Cheers!
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arigato

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Re: Kind of future
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2016, 05:28:53 pm »
Quote from: Florae on January 07, 2016, 05:23:10 pm
Loving the vibe of this and how damn full it is! Can't really critique the mixing because I'm listening to it on my crap headphones, but it sounds really good so far. Can't wait to hear the rest! :D



Thank you mate! We appreciate it! :) 
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Re: Kind of future
« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2016, 05:35:52 pm »
Quote from: iamseafarer on January 07, 2016, 05:27:06 pm
Really enjoy the composition.  The drop seems a little ambiguous and certain elements like the first set of wobble chords seem slightly out of place.  I think the mixdown could use work.  in the intro it would be sweet to bring in a cleaner, mid-low square-ish pluck to contrast all the airy saws.  Overall it seems to focus on brightness which is good, but the kick is a lil weak and it could use some more sub and just bass.  Nice feel to it, excited to hear the outcome.
Cheers!

Thank you for your critics. We try to keep your critic in the back of our minds while continue working on it. About the intro: The track still is in its beginning, but your idea is nice we will try it out :)
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Re: Kind of future wip 2
« Reply #5 on: January 09, 2016, 12:03:41 am »
Today we worked on the track again. We did't change anything drastic, just tried to make some improvements.

here it is https://soundcloud.com/arigatoo/glassydasylasy/s-lDWVI (also added "New Version" in the first post)

Let us know what do you think  :)
« Last Edit: January 09, 2016, 12:06:14 am by arigato »
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Re: Kind of future wip 2
« Reply #6 on: January 09, 2016, 02:07:01 am »
i really dig the vibe a lot all i can really say is that bass is just really bright for my ears and doesn't let the other sounds that are bright come out enough for me but all in all really good and hope you guys finish it. excited to hear it
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Re: Kind of future wip 2
« Reply #7 on: January 09, 2016, 02:24:42 am »
This is fucking amazing, though it seems to be lacking in some low end.  Either that or your mid/high end seems to be overpowering it.  I'd try EQing out as many clashing frequencies as possible and lowering the dB on your mids and highs to allow for the sub feel to come through.  Sub feel is especially important for ambient intros like that.  I'd also try dipping the 1k-5kHz frequencies a bit and boosting the 10k+ frequencies on the lead wobble to make it sound cleaner yet keep its brightness.  It would also allow for a cleaner stereo effect, which is what I'm thinking you're going for?  overall though this was very well produced.  Looking forward to the final product!
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Re: Kind of future wip 2
« Reply #8 on: January 09, 2016, 09:36:49 pm »
Thx for your feedback @caesarv.95 and @armanip.
You were right the sub-bass wasn't mixed very well, but we guess that we fixed it now (your input really helped us in the work progess thanks for that @caesarv.95   :) )
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