There´s really not a lot to say, as don´t know the original track so what you did to it is unknown.  What I can say is that it has pretty cool drum programming to begin with, but that it becomes sort of generic as it approaches the end.
When posting snippets you should ask for specific advice(make something louder etc.), as it is kinda meaningless to give feedback on something that does not even have a break. My 2 cents

As someone who's listened to the original I can say I quite like your take on this song (even if it's just the intro).
As mentioned previously though I can't say much about what's going to come next as I don't know for what kind of drop you're going for.
Really curious about it though so keep it up!