your sound design is hella solid, mixdown however could use some work as it feels unbalanced and too sub-oriented imo, the snare is nice but could be complimented with some hats or a lower volume or a ghost snare or something. I say this because that kind of snare can get really hard to listen to over and over and over and since its your primary element that's breaking up your sound design it could use some variation to prevent the listener from getting fatigued.
compo is cool, and the drum fill at 2:37 is soooo dope
good luck