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Perylian

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Amaryllis
« on: June 30, 2017, 02:44:40 pm »

Need feedback on this

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Re: Amaryllis
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2017, 11:23:48 pm »
I really enjoyed the way it began and progressed but I think after getting to the halfway point, things started to feel really repetitive for me. Just not enough variation to keep me engaged.

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Re: Amaryllis
« Reply #2 on: July 14, 2017, 12:00:02 am »
enjoy the piano, but i feel like the grit and dusty analog sounds in here to much the beat well. the beat sounds like a trap digital trap beat with fuzz onit. try lowering the high end on your eq on the drums and instruments and youd find alot of the synthy sound gets cut out and it gives the whole vibe a nicer older sound. keep it up dude

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Re: Amaryllis
« Reply #3 on: July 29, 2017, 12:47:59 am »
Hey thank you, yeah it's true i should have reworked some EQs on drums. But i feel like it's still good at this point !
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Re: Amaryllis
« Reply #4 on: July 31, 2017, 02:56:55 pm »
Good work! I really like that piano melody!