Well, keep working on it.

Mastering is a thing, Mixdown another one.

Ideas are cool, but it doesn't have enough Mid and High mid frequencies. Sounds a bit muddy. the kick and the snare could use a break. The intro is way too long and uninteresting, do some variation to make it work better. Also, the clap starting around 2:57 is awfull. You'll need a better one for sure. Second drop is better, but the mix seems to be compressed. You need to try having headroom and nothing on the master before trying anything else.

The end is the intro but fading out, instead of fading in.

Again, you have cool ideas, melodies, chords but generic sh**** structure. The way it works is fine but nothing too fancy. MAKE IT FANCY ! that's the important part in music.

so TL;DR : Remove anything "master" thing, you've use and try playing with the volume of everything else to have -3dB at least of Headroom. Try having bigger break without drums. Make it fancy. and that's it for now.

have a good day !

PS : No hate, really it's for you that I say that. I've been like that before.