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Gahmee - Pequod [Techno] | What can I improve on?
« on: January 07, 2016, 09:19:45 am »
Made this song a while back and just wondering whats your guy's opinion and where do I need to improve on.



Thanks in advance!  ;D
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Re: Gahmee - Pequod [Techno] | What can I improve on?
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 12:01:02 pm »
this is pretty cool, i like the concept. its sort of got a tech trancey feel to it which is rad. my only complaint is the kick, its too punchy (i know you could say thats a good thing) but it doesn't fit with the minimal character of the song. overall, great effort!
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Re: Gahmee - Pequod [Techno] | What can I improve on?
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 12:16:57 pm »
Quote from: JAAACKUK on January 07, 2016, 12:01:02 pm
this is pretty cool, i like the concept. its sort of got a tech trancey feel to it which is rad. my only complaint is the kick, its too punchy (i know you could say thats a good thing) but it doesn't fit with the minimal character of the song. overall, great effort!

I would agree, it has really cool direction in my opinion. Maybe a deeper kick would fit the mix more. Also, in the breakdown, I think you could add some more effects, or some reverb-y lead to fill up some space. Just my thoughts. 3:18 is sweet!
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