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offi sours

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mostly finished, looking for any feedback!
« on: January 06, 2016, 02:29:08 am »
mostly finished, just a few tweaks here and there. let me know if you love it, hate it, or catch anything else!

https://soundcloud.com/mmmaxk/mix1/s-73A04
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Re: mostly finished, looking for any feedback!
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2016, 02:31:56 am »
the vox effects in the beginning are honestly really cool
love the general vibe of the track, the melodies are spot on for sure
id say maybe make the chords in the breakdown during the middle pop a little bit more
other than that this is really cool and i really like it!
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Re: mostly finished, looking for any feedback!
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2016, 02:34:52 am »
this is mostly a very cool track, i just feel like the white noise is the hook thing is a little loud, maybe turn that down a bit! also some of the hats feel kinda low quality, i think they could be replaced with maybe some more acoustic sounding hats
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Re: mostly finished, looking for any feedback!
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2016, 03:17:45 am »
thanks guys! will take into account
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Re: mostly finished, looking for any feedback!
« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2016, 03:24:38 am »
only thing id say that hasnt been said already is that the autopan is a little bit much
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Re: mostly finished, looking for any feedback!
« Reply #5 on: January 06, 2016, 04:05:07 am »
this is fucking sick.  i love the little synths that you've added.  very good job!
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Re: mostly finished, looking for any feedback!
« Reply #6 on: January 06, 2016, 04:10:25 am »
Quote from: Hearts on January 06, 2016, 03:24:38 am
only thing id say that hasnt been said already is that the autopan is a little bit much

Agreed, the auto pan is taking away from this track, it's a bit distracting at times. But this sounds fucking awesome.
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Re: mostly finished, looking for any feedback!
« Reply #7 on: January 06, 2016, 04:43:21 am »
Quote from: eidolon on January 06, 2016, 04:27:27 am
i like this so much!

like the others said, the panning thing is kinda annoying, i'd think about taking it down a bit. outside of that, the ride at 2:26-ish felt a little too loud, maybe make it a bit quieter? honestly, i don't have that much to critique about it, this is really well made. the switch up at 1:38 in particular is really nice!

heyo thank you! i agree about the autopan especially on that lead haha, thanks for listening : )
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