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Future wip w/ my friends ASMR vocals :D
« on: January 07, 2016, 08:23:27 am »
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Re: Future wip w/ my friends ASMR vocals :D
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 11:25:37 am »
Idea is cool but:

-Vox is too wet and not properly EQ'd imo (you can still hear some noise)
-Drums need work and are not loud enough, specially the kick, which is missing some punch and maybe a ride/hi-hat/click layer.
-Last chord feels weird
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Re: Future wip w/ my friends ASMR vocals :D
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 02:21:42 pm »
the vocal is pretty resonant in the 300-700 area. notch it or roll off the low-mids.

kick is too soft. bus your kick and snares and treat them.

your synths are lacking shine. throw an ott/saturn/ over them. stereo delay a layer.  the main lead doesn't complement the chords well and flutters all over the place. it's also too present in the mix, to the point that it's louder than the drums. i'd use a less conspicuous lead.
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Re: Future wip w/ my friends ASMR vocals :D
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2016, 06:01:02 pm »
The other feedback was good.  Overall great feel to the track.
I think the lower parts of the chords could progress/change/descend more on the first major synth hit, maybe after 2 bars.  It feels very static/non-moving for how uplifting it is.  Nice work overall
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Re: Future wip w/ my friends ASMR vocals :D
« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2016, 06:54:11 pm »
Thanks guys!!! Such quality feedback. I agree with everything you guys said, and will take note. Great call on the box being resonant she (I think she stacks verbs for her ASMR for some reason). Im glad you guys attacked my mix it needs it but I'm trying a new work flow where I just work creatively and not focus too much on mix untill the end of the "writing" process because I used to get wayyyy to hung up on tech stuff and make shit music idk. I fear I'm making a headache for later but ~   also great call on the evolution on the chords *noted*   stoked on this forum already !!!
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