Hey,

This is my strongest track right now, just looking for a little feedback, Ive grown really accustomed to this song so I don't know if I'm missing anything important or overlooking small errors. Please let me know if anything strikes you as odd or stands out. I'd love to receive some criticism so that I can make this track the best it can be.

The theme is a melancholy walk through the park, kind of sad happy vibe. I think it would really benefit from an experienced vocalist but those are hard to come by. I'll be posting two more tracks that are progressive midtempo over the next few days, trying to make this style my identifiable sound.

-deño

https://soundcloud.com/denoproductions/a-day-in-the-park-1/s-pqKHE

Hey,

First thing first, the piano could use some humanization. Means you need to make sure all the notes don't have the same velocity because no humans plays like that.

Kick sounds fine but could be better. Snare isn't great. Needs to be punchier. HIT IT ! Sub Bass is good. Lead is good, but too brief. The progression is fine.

And that's it.