Hello, as I am listening the intro sounds great! The guitar and piano makes it very organic and original, the thing is that i am not a huge fan of the drop. Im listening through my earbuds so it wont be as precise as studio monitors but it need more layering in the drop the stereo and mono layers respectively and the bass sounds too low. Try and get reference tracks if you havent done it yet(e.g. nicky romero's harmony would be a good example) or other artist you like and analyze his works(arrangement, sound etc) it may help

This track has potencial keep going duude!