First thought is that the snare is incredibly short. Like, its kinda unsettling, but it works I guess. Also this feels more to me like trap, but whatever, genres are lame anyway. The lead that you're using is kinda weird for the drop, I feel like you could replace it with something else more percussive. The breakbeat is cool, and I think you could ride on that a little more. Other than that, I don't really know what else to say. This is a cool start!

Also, where is that picture from? I feel like I've seen it before.