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ok actual feedback! composition: the intro is really strong. that little pluck ostinato is so nice, i love how it jumps up an octave. overall, it feels concise, no part overstays its welcome. i think you could develop the bridge at 1:58 a little bit more, i like it as is, but maybe in the 2:10 section adding some new harmonic element or more atmosphere could help it release and build up better.

mixing: the spaces you create in the verses work really well, i like how sparse they are to let the vocals shine through. i said this in the Slack, but i think the drop could use a little refinement. the kick stands out too much, and the clap/snare could be brought up a little bit. the bass could also be brought up, and the vocals taken down - maybe playing with their rhythms could help with that.

i know that's a lot of critique for a finished piece, but u can always go back and work with it someday in the future. for now tho, awesome job!! you're improving a lot.