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Third track!
« on: January 22, 2017, 08:27:39 pm »
So every week I make 2 full songs to show to my friends its a goal of mine to break the habit of only completing half songs but I only upload 1 heres the third one im really trying to get good mixes I felt like this one had to much low end

https://soundcloud.com/jeremy-pompa-1/red-x-serenity

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Re: Third track!
« Reply #1 on: January 24, 2017, 05:06:26 am »
I really like the sound that comes in at the breakdown. The main lead though is a bit hard on the ears, and since it doesn't change a lot it gets a little boring by the end. Generally a good song though, and the drums sound great!

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Re: Third track!
« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2017, 08:35:42 pm »
I'm immediately attracted to the second song than the first; may be a preference thing. Its captivating trance-like beat--especially how the song starts and builds up--is simple and coherent, generally great choice of chords as well--easy to digest, yet fun and pretty trendy (and I use that as a compliment!). Flows effortlessly, up and down; feels like the flow has a subtle narrative going. The drop/hook is highly finished, well put with all the varying trickling melody sounds, the drums here and there. Dramatic and energetic. However, I wish there was more thought to the actual drumline in general. It's a pretty constant one-two-one-two rhythm (i lack the technical terms for that beat). Also, the song ends the same way it begins--removing (adding) one layer of music at a time. Which isn't a bad thing, it's a bit predictible. Overall, I would listen to this again and again. Well done!