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Emod - Can't Keep Going [WIP]
« on: January 06, 2016, 02:27:12 am »
This is a short WIP of what i have done lately. I would categorize it as trance. What do you guys think?
https://soundcloud.com/emod_music/cant-keep-going

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Re: Emod - Can't Keep Going [WIP]
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2016, 02:32:36 am »
The song idea is great. I like the melody... If you finish the song, it would be great.
By the way, I think the kick needs more bass!

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Re: Emod - Can't Keep Going [WIP]
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2016, 02:39:37 am »
Wow, I was suprised because a lot of songs that are posted on forums are bad, but this is very much to my liking and wouldn't be surprised if I saw it on a label. :)
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Re: Emod - Can't Keep Going [WIP]
« Reply #3 on: January 06, 2016, 02:50:48 am »
The song idea is great. I like the melody... If you finish the song, it would be great.
By the way, I think the kick needs more bass!

Thank you! I have been considering swapping the kick as well (though that is really bad in an already-started production imo). I might layer it with another kick or something too.

Wow, I was suprised because a lot of songs that are posted on forums are bad, but this is very much to my liking and wouldn't be surprised if I saw it on a label. :)

Thank you! That is indeed a really nice thing to hear :)

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Re: Emod - Can't Keep Going [WIP]
« Reply #4 on: January 06, 2016, 02:57:29 am »
to me, i think it'd be a lot more interesting if you added a little variation to the melody at the end of every 4 bars. specifically the lower portion of the melody. it'd also help the melody loop and flow more naturally