Cool track man, but the bass is a bit overpowering and taking away from the other elements. Maybe try pulling it back
a bit?

nice ideas, will be a great track when its done.

I think for now you need to work on the mix. Currently the mix is all over the place. Take a reference track, something similar to yours then try to adjust your levels to match the reference track.

highs/hihats are way too loud in the beginning.

:P