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Need some feeback on my last track, is it good ? is it bad ? :)
« on: January 13, 2017, 04:27:29 am »
Here it is ! You can listen to it on my Soundcloud : https://soundcloud.com/alarmowl/time-goddess
Or on my Youtube Channel : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I0eMEEMl8_A

It was a lot of work :) !
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Re: Need some feeback on my last track, is it good ? is it bad ? :)
« Reply #1 on: January 13, 2017, 09:40:53 pm »
Melodic sensibility and good sound in general is definitely there. The thing that gives your song its personality is the lead. Let the chords play for a bit, then introduce the lead - it will have more impact. I feel like this could really use a female vocal, maybe it could be the basis for a remix? 
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