i really really love the synths you used in this. that reverby distorty thing works really well. how did you process them?
the main area that could use improvement is the drums imo. i like the rhythms themselves, but the snare feels like it's lower quality/ is missing some high-end info. also, there are a few parts when the bass jumps up to the higher octaves that it gets way louder, you might want to fix that a little bit. this has a tonnnn of potential, its a step or two away still but i think it will be really great. you can do it!