Author Topic: This is my FIRST production! Need your feedback! (Read 4318 times)

Jayber.C · « **on:** January 09, 2017, 03:39:31 pm »

Hi! I'm a new one. In tpf and in electronic music too! Need your listeners' opinion about this:

https://youtu.be/fOD8uxhx0ig

Thank You!

Oricco · « **Reply #1 on:** January 11, 2017, 10:07:23 am »

Nice idea, like it alot. I would like it if there was some more melody to the track, right now to me it sound like there are just sounds bouncing around without any logical order to it. Some simple melody would elevate the track alot I think.

Hope it helps you!

Feel fre to check out my track and tell me your feedback, my first production too:

https://soundcloud.com/user-370429602/youll-find-it

Jayber.C · « **Reply #2 on:** January 11, 2017, 10:34:07 am »

Thank You.
I listened to your track. It sounds Good. I understand what You told me about melodies...Your work is really full of melodic ideas that remain in ears long after the end of the song!

Authentica · « **Reply #3 on:** January 11, 2017, 01:50:42 pm »

Wow, nice first work.

I like the style.

Nice synth work.

Author Topic: This is my FIRST production! Need your feedback! (Read 4318 times)

Jayber.C

This is my FIRST production! Need your feedback!

Oricco

Re: This is my FIRST production! Need your feedback!

Jayber.C

Re: This is my FIRST production! Need your feedback!

Authentica

Re: This is my FIRST production! Need your feedback!