i agree with alan! some progressions are common because they're effective. one thing i would recommend is adding variety to the note lengths on that lead synth at 0:30. the melody is quite nice, but giving it to us the same way over & over again makes it get a little stale over the course of a song. also, i would consider adding in more of a low end when the plucks come in at 0:40, either adding a lower voicing on the pluck or some kind of a separate bassline.
this is a nice start, though. i can't wait to see where you take it!