this is the same one from your last thread, right? sounds like its progressed a bit! the drums sound cleaner, which i like.

the vocal chops that come in at 1:20 sound like theyre kind of out of key, which might be intentional but id' be careful there. more than anything, again, it feels like it could still use some more layering and atmosphere. the little drum fills are nice additions, but i think more synth layers could really bring this to another level.

keep at it!!