sounds like youve got a good starting point, but it also sounds pretty empty.

i would try referencing some other trance songs you like. a lot of the genre's complexity comes from the layering of different sounds to create progression. that can manifest in poppier tracks like ilan Bluestone's stuff, or in more psy-trance-y stuff like Tezla with just a kick, basses, and ambience. or really whatever inspires you! pick it apart and find the different layers, maybe even try remaking it. it helps a lot. good luck with this, make sure to keep us updated!