So for the last couple of months I've been working rly hard on writing an EP & so far I've got abt like 3 songs that are wip & i wanna put out a single prior to releasing it.

this is the one i have in mind.

please feel free to let me know what you guys think abt this & give some constructive criticism. It would be greatly appreciated!

thank you so much !!

https://clyp.it/ft1fkgul

Good work this is sounding really solid. I agree that vocals would fit in really nicely here. Right now it just needs a lead of some sort to drive it forward a little bit more. (Though the vocals would also do the trick). As it is, it sounds like you repeat the same chord progression every 4 bars for the most part (which is fine), having a lead would fix that sounding a bit repetitive.

Good stuff!