Sounding pretty good.
Mixing is obviously off in the drop, but I think you can see that yourself.
Your leads are sidechained a little excessively I believe and they also don't have that "spark."
And the overall mixdown could be more solid!
Comes with practice!
I'm still not even near to where I want to be with my progressive drops. It's frustrating.
But once you get the hang of it. The feeling is so rewarding.
Just keep at it man! We got this