Awesome work for your first production! Better than mine i'll say
Great harmony between your instruments, clean production, and I really love the intro.
The only thing that I could really pick at is the ending is a little abrupt, and it is lacking in the middle range. There's the low pad, drums, and the one vocal pluck for the low end. Then you have the vocal, synth plucks for the treble but the middle is left kinda open creating a boxy sound to the track. It still sounds great though!
Really great work! Keep it up