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MOTY

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First ever close to finished song!
« on: November 10, 2016, 04:12:51 am »
Feedback strongly wanted...
https://soundcloud.com/motycm/hey/s-XGlh8

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Re: First ever close to finished song!
« Reply #1 on: November 11, 2016, 06:29:49 am »
I haven't produced that long (about a year), but I do think it is pretty fresh... Especially the guitar parts (which I've tried to do but have been unsuccessful), specifically from 0:46-1:00. I almost want to say there could be more mid bass or sub bass, but I can't really tell on my speakers right now. Keep up the good work!

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Re: First ever close to finished song!
« Reply #2 on: November 11, 2016, 07:20:35 pm »
Awesome work for your first production! Better than mine i'll say ;)

Great harmony between your instruments, clean production, and I really love the intro.

The only thing that I could really pick at is the ending is a little abrupt, and it is lacking in the middle range. There's the low pad, drums, and the one vocal pluck for the low end. Then you have the vocal, synth plucks for the treble but the middle is left kinda open creating a boxy sound to the track. It still sounds great though!

Really great work! Keep it up
-London!