I would keep working on it. Just need to clean some things up in my opinion.
With house music, imo, the high end drums should stand out a little more. The kick seemed ok to me. The hi hats could be a little more crisp and maybe a little louder. Not much louder though. The clap seems a little flat too. Like when the hi hats come in, they blend in too much with the clap. Those are my suggestions. Hope they help.
