I dunno if its on purpose, but the little vocal chop that you have in the riser is only a 2nd away from the root, which is a little unorthodox. Maybe try a more consonant interval like a 5th or something? Also, the song seems to lose a ton of energy after the riser. The big thing you should be thinking about in a drop isnt so much how it sounds, but how it retains all the energy that you've built up during the riser. I would recommend adding a supersaw chord at the beginning of each bar, or a percussion loop early on. I don't know where you want to go with this track, so these are decisions you would have to make yourself. The wobble is a cool idea, and the rhythmicness that you have going on with it is nice. Hope I was helpful!

I dunno if its on purpose, but the little vocal chop that you have in the riser is only a 2nd away from the root, which is a little unorthodox. Maybe try a more consonant interval like a 5th or something? Also, the song seems to lose a ton of energy after the riser. The big thing you should be thinking about in a drop isnt so much how it sounds, but how it retains all the energy that you've built up during the riser. I would recommend adding a supersaw chord at the beginning of each bar, or a percussion loop early on. I don't know where you want to go with this track, so these are decisions you would have to make yourself. The wobble is a cool idea, and the rhythmicness that you have going on with it is nice. Hope I was helpful!

Thanks for the well thought out feedback! Most of the things you took up are design choices. But we will try changing some things to see how it sounds.