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guppi

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i dont know what this is missing
« on: October 17, 2016, 09:36:10 pm »
hey, asking for some opinions. thanks

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Re: i dont know what this is missing
« Reply #1 on: October 19, 2016, 03:56:16 am »
The only problem that I have with it is that the pattern that you used for the lead is a little weird compared to the beat sometimes... It sounds really good other than that it just sounds off sometimes.
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Re: i dont know what this is missing
« Reply #2 on: October 21, 2016, 02:41:17 am »
I think the rhythm's fine. And for the kind of industrial trappy sound you seem to be going for, I don't think it's missing anything, just the mixing could be better, imo it's a bit too compressed or distorted even for that type of sound
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Re: i dont know what this is missing
« Reply #3 on: October 22, 2016, 01:56:29 am »
Quote from: No Mind on October 21, 2016, 02:41:17 am
I think the rhythm's fine. And for the kind of industrial trappy sound you seem to be going for, I don't think it's missing anything, just the mixing could be better, imo it's a bit too compressed or distorted even for that type of sound
i totally feel u on that, theres a good amount of effects on that sound so i might just tone it down w those a lil. imma eventually go back to that someday aha thank you man
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