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electronica wip
« on: January 06, 2016, 11:54:23 pm »
i have been recently working on this and wanted to get some feedback. thanks

https://soundcloud.com/knownsource/january6v2/s-dJlyQ

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Re: electronica wip
« Reply #1 on: January 07, 2016, 12:43:23 am »
Not bad, really digging the fullness of the keys!It would be cool if you put some bass stabs in there maybe every 8 bars or so change things up. I mean keep the keys obviously, but maybe layering something on top ya know?

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Re: electronica wip
« Reply #2 on: January 07, 2016, 12:47:42 am »
musically this is pretty damn cool, but I feel like changing up the sounds and adding some processing would make this golden. Also, the snare is a little too wide to my ear, it sounds airy rather than punchy to me. I would create two layers, one nice and wide and airy like you have, and another one with a 200hz bump to add some thump (unless that airy sound is what you were going for)

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Re: electronica wip
« Reply #3 on: January 07, 2016, 12:58:10 am »
Not bad, really digging the fullness of the keys!It would be cool if you put some bass stabs in there maybe every 8 bars or so change things up. I mean keep the keys obviously, but maybe layering something on top ya know?
musically this is pretty damn cool, but I feel like changing up the sounds and adding some processing would make this golden. Also, the snare is a little too wide to my ear, it sounds airy rather than punchy to me. I would create two layers, one nice and wide and airy like you have, and another one with a 200hz bump to add some thump (unless that airy sound is what you were going for)
thanks for the feedback! as for basstabs i may potentially add them to 'spice' things up in the song. as for the snare, i was actually just messing around with it in fl and i think i made it more punchy than 'airy' as you described.