Dat Trance tho. I think you have a lot of great ideas in this track, and I can tell you have a really good sense of direction and progression. The mixdown is pretty clean, though your kick sounds just a touch muddy - You could probably cut out some of the 150-250 Hz range and open up that low end a bit more.
Your arrangement could use some work - you have the macro scale pretty solid, and you know that you should have fills and flourishes, but sometimes the progression of your track feels a bit disjointed - like when you started lowpassing your kick in preparation for the breakdown. When the last kick happens at the start of the break, it's just this muddy thump. If you put an impact noise (like drenching a kick in reverb and rendering it out) underneath it, for example, you might feel as though there's a much stronger resolution of your intro and a much stronger introduction of your breakdown. It might also benefit from having instruments other than the kick acting as the fill or the buildup - noise sweeps, tom fills, riser synths, all that good stuff can allow your kick to remain relatively constant and give you that same feeling of tension and release.
If you haven't picked a reference already, some Gareth Emery, Armin Van Buuren, or Monoverse could be helpful to compare with your own work and see where you might go with it.
