This is a great remix! Your mix is almost spot on, and all the sounds are fantastic.

My only remark would be that the supersaw chords in the choruses are very hard to detect, and there are certain points where the loudness jumps quite a bit (like from the last chorus to the beginning of the outro) and it's a bit jarring. Your instrumentation and orchestration are really good, though sometimes things get a little cluttered when you have Drums + Chords + Vocal chops + Melody + FX all going at the same time.

Can't wait to see what else you put out.

Any time you don't know what to do, try doing what I do: Steal from someone who does know what they're doing.

In other words, I usually have at least one and as many as 3 or 4 tracks that are in the direction I want to go sitting inside my project so that I can actively reference from them and "borrow" an element from one of them - either vaguely influencing my direction or outright copying them, depending upon what I might need in that moment.