Great concept! I love the groove of the drop, super deep/future house vibes! The arrangement's fantastic as well.

My biggest critique would be the mixdown - it sounds just a tad muddy, and the little arp melody you have in the verses feels quiet and can get lost in the mix. I would also take a look at the distorted 808 sub layer you were using throughout the track (like under the kick in the intro and the first verse) - it doesn't really feel like it fits the rest of the song in terms of the vibe of the track (it sounds like something out of a big room or melbourne bounce track) and in general doesn't really sound that good a quality, which detracts from an otherwise impressive song.

Can't wait to hear your next tune.