I think this track has a lot of promise! It sounds like you have basically everything you need. If your song was a cheeseburger, you have the bun, you have the patties, you have the lettuce and the tomatoes, you have the ketchup, and you even have a sprinkling of salt and pepper in there for extra flavor.
Unfortunately your lettuce is a whole leaf, you have a single cherry tomato, your beef patties are different sizes, and your bread is too thin. Take some time to look at how the whole song should sound in relation to each other, and go from there.
Beyond the mixing, you should take some time and pick something that can unify the song together, and can give it something memorable the listener can hold onto. Look for some reference tracks that might help you if you're having trouble (Jay Fay, Dillon Francis, and Foxsky are some good Moombah artists that you could look to).
