First off I think the vocals are too low. The kick is really low. There no boom in it. A lot of low end missing. I can tell you just started producing! I feel as your concept is there you're just not executing it well.

Heres one of my new releases. Maybe you can learn a couple stuff from it (Im not that great either but im getting there)

 https://soundcloud.com/yunsiemusic/deorro-butt-naked-yunsie-remix