When that arp comes in, maybe cut off some of the low end on that pluck in the beginning!
Saws have very nice layering, love the vocal. I like your kick, but it's lacking in transient for me.
Be careful on your last build up, there was a lot of elements going on. I've read things where the untrained ear can only really hone on 3 different things going on, but you had a lot going on which is kind of just distracting.
Overall this is good, I really like it. Good job!
