Author Topic: MarMar - Haze | Trappy sort of track  (Read 3958 times)

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MarMar - Haze | Trappy sort of track
« on: July 24, 2016, 04:39:13 am »

Hey y'all, tried making a trap track. I know the mixing is off, I could have made it better but my computer keeps crapping out on me whenever I try to make any more changes to the file project. Would appreciate some feedback on structure/overall idea of the song. Thanks!

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Re: MarMar - Haze | Trappy sort of track
« Reply #1 on: July 26, 2016, 09:51:28 am »
The sound coming in at 0:38 seems a bit too overpowering. Sounds very generic too imo.  Build up was nice. Sound of the lead in the drop is too overpowering. Kind of too repetitive too. The little fills you have in the drop sound nice.

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Re: MarMar - Haze | Trappy sort of track
« Reply #2 on: July 26, 2016, 03:05:47 pm »
thanks for the feedback. yeah I agree about pretty much everything, but this is the farthest I could get to in my track without my computer shitting on me lol. Was lucky it even exported. And nice track, very clean stuff.

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Re: MarMar - Haze | Trappy sort of track
« Reply #3 on: July 27, 2016, 05:41:04 am »
yeahhhh you should do somethin bout that computer of yours lmao