compositionally you nailed that sound madeon did on Adventure REALLY well (that 9th chord especially feels very madeon-y) but also expand on it in ur own way. i like it a LOT. i think that the saws at 1:39 could be turned down, or the low end brought up, really the high end in general feels a little overbearing. fix that and this will honestly be amazing!!
also. if you want, we have a chat where we talk about music that's pretty cool, you should join! the links are in my bio~