I was excited to see a new piece of work posted by you. That being said, I really like the intros vocals. At 0:25 there is a weird riser I hear? Not sure if it's some weird feedback but it's very faint and does not sit well at all. I had to go back and replay it couple of times cause I wasn't sure if that was just some outside noise I was hearing. I like your arpeggio you have going, what did you use to make that if you don't mind me asking?
At 1:50 there's another riser it sounds like that's maybe out of key? May need to be pitched up a little bit more, kind of sounds outside of the mix. It's kind of clashing with the reverb of the vocals, maybe just use some noise. That's just being extremely picky though. Great work!