Author Topic: Phantoms | One of my first finished tracks, any feedback much appreciated (Read 4928 times)

SeemsFun · « **on:** July 05, 2016, 01:56:13 pm »

I've been a long time lurker on this forum and I've finally gotten to finish a track that I think sounds decent. I'd be very glad if some of you could give me some feedback on how it sounds, mix and composition wise. Thanks!

bloodbit · « **Reply #1 on:** July 05, 2016, 05:17:37 pm »

Hey there fellow lurker and welcome!
I would recommend going further in processing your kicks and claps, for me they lacked depth and detracted from the overall feel of the track. Instances where the track sounded spacious the clap would come in with such a short decay that it felt conflicting and contradictory to the situation. Having that extra bit of detail can make the track sound more lively and cohesive; good first track though, don't ever be afraid to experiment!

SeemsFun · « **Reply #2 on:** July 06, 2016, 05:30:27 pm »

Quote from: beattlejuice on July 05, 2016, 05:17:37 pm

Hey there fellow lurker and welcome!
I would recommend going further in processing your kicks and claps, for me they lacked depth and detracted from the overall feel of the track. Instances where the track sounded spacious the clap would come in with such a short decay that it felt conflicting and contradictory to the situation. Having that extra bit of detail can make the track sound more lively and cohesive; good first track though, don't ever be afraid to experiment!

Thanks for the feedback! You're right, my drums really do need more work as a whole.

Author Topic: Phantoms | One of my first finished tracks, any feedback much appreciated (Read 4928 times)

SeemsFun

Phantoms | One of my first finished tracks, any feedback much appreciated

bloodbit

Re: Phantoms | One of my first finished tracks, any feedback much appreciated

SeemsFun

Re: Phantoms | One of my first finished tracks, any feedback much appreciated