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JAFARi

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Honestly I think it's one of my best song
« on: June 28, 2016, 10:55:54 pm »

So i'm here whit this WIP and I don't know if it's the drop's melody or the whole vibe but i fucking love it (I don't want do brag lol)

It's all nice, but I want other people opinion, so if you could take a listen and give me feedback afterward, It would be nice because lately people don't answer my posts here lol

Thx!!
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Re: Honestly I think it's one of my best song
« Reply #1 on: June 29, 2016, 01:09:39 am »
It's good! Think it just needs more "energy" in the drop, at least in the second half of it.
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Re: Honestly I think it's one of my best song
« Reply #2 on: June 30, 2016, 05:19:19 pm »
I really like the melodic ideas here, especially in the drop. Arps as well.

Try and use the lower frequencies more. At the thirty-second mark, consider adding more notes to fill out the chords and possibly some quiet, eqed subs to do the job as well.
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Re: Honestly I think it's one of my best song
« Reply #3 on: July 02, 2016, 01:22:01 am »
Quote from: XXL on June 29, 2016, 01:09:39 am
It's good! Think it just needs more "energy" in the drop, at least in the second half of it.

Agreed. Try adding a new element like a piano or something to bring the listener back. Add interest. Example: This is a track I'm working, notice how I add a piano at 4:30? Try doing something similar. https://soundcloud.com/erikf-2/master-6/s-XxFy9

As for the drop, a nice way to add energy initially is to automate the stereo field of the entire song. I bring mine close 50% mono right before I want to introduce a big element (like a chorus), and then I slam it back up when the "drop" hits.

Another tip: bounce your buildup to .wav and then cutoff and reverb tails or whatever right before the drop. It'll add punch and it really adds interest.
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