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new track
« on: June 16, 2016, 10:26:52 am »
« Last Edit: June 16, 2016, 10:33:52 am by zerupame »

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Re: new track
« Reply #1 on: June 16, 2016, 04:33:48 pm »
The piano at the beginning feels very natural, and sounds really solid - it has great presence in the mix. The chords are very brooding as well, and powerful. I like the dissonance in the progression.

Love the kicks when they come in coupled with the white noise, they sound really well mixed, but I would maybe cut the frequency off a little higher. I think they bring just a tad too much low end.
The pluck synth sounds really nice though, and I like the buildup it has up to 1:16. I do wish the length started to get longer on each pluck, but it still sounds solid.

I'd maybe consider putting another white noise little sweep there at 1:16 to make the transition to that new lead a little more natural, but I like the lead itself.

Nice break at 1:47. Very natural and hard hitting. It goes into a very pretty section as well, with the pluck and pad blending very well together. Maybe bring out the pad a little more though, I really like it!

Great transition into 2:18. Haha and there's your signature dubstep ending, building and then dropping at 2:33. I don't like this section quite as much as the previous track I critiqued, but it still sounds well mixed with the growls. Again, I'd maybe add one or two more just to break the repetition of sound a bit, but boy the percussion sounds nice. It sounds really nice throughout now that I think about it.

Glad you messaged me though, keep 'em coming! I really liked this track overall, better than your last in my opinion. :)