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Fruits and house music
« on: June 13, 2016, 02:12:48 am »
Hi guys!

This is my first post, sorry if my english is bad, well i made this track "Windows" some months ago. Tell me what do you think about this song, is a very Tropical/Ambient style.

https://soundcloud.com/juan-pablo-mari-o-256350244/post-effect-window

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Re: Fruits and house music
« Reply #1 on: June 13, 2016, 10:52:45 pm »
I know this is an ambient/house track, but to me there was not enough variation or complexity to keep me engaged. I like the beginning and the transition into the drop but halfway through the drop it just feels too repetitive, which is probably something that comes down to taste.
Try layering and throwing in weird but cohesive sounds that dont derail the listener but keep them wanting more. :) good job though I think this was done creatively just needed more development.

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Re: Fruits and house music
« Reply #2 on: June 14, 2016, 03:23:36 am »
I know this is an ambient/house track, but to me there was not enough variation or complexity to keep me engaged. I like the beginning and the transition into the drop but halfway through the drop it just feels too repetitive, which is probably something that comes down to taste.
Try layering and throwing in weird but cohesive sounds that dont derail the listener but keep them wanting more. :) good job though I think this was done creatively just needed more development.

I think i should add a little melody on the drop.